Comic 2 - Crystal and the Magic Crystal - Chapter 1 - Page 2

7th Oct 2009, 6:59 PM in The Graveyard
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Crystal and the Magic Crystal - Chapter 1 - Page 2
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Author Notes:

BambooPrince 12th Oct 2009, 8:47 PM edit delete
BambooPrince
This page was inked instead of clean penciled and photoshoped darker.

Comments:

Alicia 19th Oct 2009, 6:45 PM edit delete
Alicia
Yay! I had seen these before and now I'm excited to see the finished thing! Looking great; I love your art style and I can't wait to see more!
2gcomic 24th Oct 2009, 6:21 PM edit delete
2gcomic
Oh noes! She fell! Hello Kitty bandages to the rescue!
Sonar 28th Oct 2009, 12:48 PM edit delete
instant hello kitty band-aid to the rescue!

The text is creating a tangent in the first panel under her chin and against the side of the panel, I'd suggest using a smaller type font maybe?
tiffany 30th Oct 2009, 11:18 PM edit delete
its pretty good, but its pretty scary also when Crystals climbing up the fence